【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 I  Q1 i0 U+ P9 R0 W' xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( y7 _  n: Y5 \$ MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) H! f7 e9 ^/ ]# LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- \$ X' ]2 w; W4 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; q4 t( y* l# Z8 C/ t: J/ g7 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 }# i- ]; W6 x& L( X/ eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 `1 [/ E5 T2 J' u1 R' s( BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 s/ Q2 ~8 P. d6 D- @7 @I really want to know just how much you love me
) V+ V6 S2 Q3 v' }  n, wI love you I love you with all my heart
! ?) F% k. N0 P- s( t" V! jNothing can compare to my love
  q# k2 m8 }; ]7 G/ qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) L/ O! m  S7 [- M  k0 Z( `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# J  b# q# _5 f5 H5 c" ]6 @; i8 {  lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: K6 o" q+ U- }& r2 t) dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ l& b/ S- @2 U# }& gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 T( D2 L6 g/ {' y, k2 W" QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. z  F( S7 T( P8 H" NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ u( M6 l- I5 B+ S% k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 R3 f2 q) m% ~! ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 f) W* K0 c( @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 S% L0 C5 D$ c/ l" s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 n* X6 f+ s" Q' h# ]8 Y8 v. _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. N2 B6 g  L6 f" R0 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 B% w* f' y+ U7 [' g  [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! k; a. g4 @  q0 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, Y- z4 e1 @4 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ X- C# e1 I: G* u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, Z; W3 N' ?( A2 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; k& \% n. Z0 J2 k( ?7 O. m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, W* b& t; N! j) \% {( F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 G4 g# Y- ]* s/ S% s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% T* Q9 S& g- ^6 e3 M, p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! }- J; j% _9 ~- X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 K( i8 ^- |! R$ F. d' ^. d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" D5 b' d- V9 B/ r% I6 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  [% }# i/ x! C6 e+ J: m) o) V/ o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 D2 D4 s  ]- l$ U6 z& d0 }& |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, J# P9 r7 t) S) R( o( l1 ^. m! A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; [  C9 P# z# }/ [; i6 X; N% R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 s2 z  b! Y9 `1 _0 n6 z: s0 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ z$ I, N# {3 w1 ~  _. g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. @. `3 g; t0 X! Q  [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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2 ]; C, Y* [3 N7 i6 u( I/ Y- x* I) E% n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 R6 C, h2 ^* d$ m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>