【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( L. X: g6 {8 b+ U1 h% H/ OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 f8 y5 l4 Z! |, sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ Y5 |3 g; H4 \* \With the moon kissing it every night
6 E' \% g& [6 D3 _/ O, Y% k4 lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( l# `! @7 C- A! `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 U1 B; _* O: [7 e, B- |7 {I really want to know just how much you love me
, [0 B9 l) W) E) nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& \  L# o; j9 F, v0 l- OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: ~. N2 n2 a9 ^& F5 R  n+ YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( z% A; X0 ?' SWith such a tongue as yours,
8 [: ^# M* I7 g0 D% s, ?7 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ^& I1 s) m0 f- W6 _  F7 i* qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: c; p' G3 v+ ^4 P5 J& R. XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ n# h  R- o! h: F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; a6 w- t. k: }6 R2 _$ t8 B$ f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' N4 ]7 Q' W' f- ?2 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 S' [' O& S: b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ K# e3 @( g1 b9 }( o" M8 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 B+ J' t1 [7 n& _6 }. R/ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) P4 x1 n- M5 j3 b9 c1 R* _+ |/ R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 _6 m# h9 ]# a9 d3 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! Z! y( K. R$ H3 z$ z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 F4 g3 Y& J% @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  h% `; {6 F+ B& w7 g5 |<P>你无需担心</P>
% l1 S) N, W! g8 [' w+ |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ]* p9 _1 H8 @0 ~* F( W# v( i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% F# f3 _/ {' `/ a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: M" H. L9 S! T1 R) l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ^, R' c6 k: Q+ y. E  x/ \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% \6 M+ a1 c$ D+ j9 L7 M9 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* S/ r# g9 u. s: g. |" E& v4 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 I$ O* h+ G6 t5 P' f. E% w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, f% Z6 D- ?9 l, n4 g  P& ~3 `; N, E1 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 U) _1 C* v9 g+ u# `  V" E& C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 W8 x. X: q: y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# j$ d! Q: q2 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 F( v6 u# f  |0 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& g- C9 c: s2 i: ?% o. l/ c4 X# w( s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 d! }8 N) |1 ?% d, H/ W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& K5 H! w6 V% T7 K1 @" D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# e1 N" P7 K) u+ V0 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: l/ N" Y% L" A# p0 g+ M8 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ^& J; C& g1 {2 n4 c$ \- U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ S  v+ a9 f4 Z4 m" A; I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: |0 M, l6 _1 Y( V4 y( T9 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>