【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 t  t* C  t/ @" o- j6 V0 G# h& i歌词我附在后面。
: {8 b; X! C0 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 A! C+ J3 n9 N; M7 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  f& A- O' i1 f; o& D2 R- ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, w% V  v6 G, ~  |* m  DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 M4 h; |$ C' IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 e; O. e1 B  J% A: WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' c  m6 T' f. M9 `/ rEvery other word you utter is love
& x6 A. q$ h  W; t6 g' r/ j) \I really want to know just how much you love me
+ b6 I: P) [- P7 fI love you I love you with all my heart
) l  `; q, P; W- I5 D, T2 \: YNothing can compare to my love
: R! E2 N" r' K1 d" A! RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. E5 g7 ^! `2 i2 l# G, d- i" RI want so much to see inside your heart
1 B* n# x, x7 u1 ?5 M  \2 R+ eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, Y2 F! G1 n, Z9 R% @4 p' q4 DI’m still filled with fear
4 c3 ^7 Z' P- oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ^* P. M/ V9 R1 u8 @I regret not dying
4 y) [, V, m0 A. U6 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 D' |- P- W" e) Q5 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  g/ f9 b2 F9 [1 H/ l0 E2 H$ yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% [( B  S( d4 C; M* {& B+ _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 E+ K) j, w' v# {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; K0 K' @8 G1 G# w& p9 |1 ?) A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 H; y% ~& n$ l4 K( D5 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! \& ~! ^# y. B4 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 m9 t+ `$ q3 \5 t* u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, w, m/ K  q  C4 |$ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& n' l1 n" ]; H6 B4 h3 M0 s: V2 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! o* C3 `) q/ }3 O6 E- y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* H- Q' e- Q& K7 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, K* i7 Q7 r- \% H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 X$ Y, T8 r+ m+ l1 f# _% |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* ?! b! N2 J8 t* n  B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% a) N7 q( |" [* q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ y0 z0 ^* \# D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# K) `6 X4 z" w' g* {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ C" k1 W7 z* @# m5 B* y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ d5 k' A9 \0 q/ f2 B! ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, E) {2 b  p3 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: e' P" ?# u; K0 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. L0 t4 M+ s" g# D1 t& c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- y! N8 z5 P( ?& Q$ U7 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ q6 p1 f" M4 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 @# O1 t- L" j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 n/ E$ h! o1 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# ?- e1 y: g- g7 x3 d( s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>