【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% z8 d% w2 Z4 g2 f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 A0 ~, v; g' p; iWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 c' M8 V" z7 E& V) QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& ]" V- v+ J9 m" ~2 @7 [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! l) f- B" h! A% G! C0 FI want to confess that I love you,
2 |3 l9 T3 A+ c9 s: tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* L, o7 U3 j7 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ?/ t* j' x4 E$ A' U+ VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, I7 i2 e2 ^: I. M- CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 s3 S7 x& q' [% @5 [' \+ X4 q1 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 q9 W$ K( d- v7 E- U% D) P4 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 ?7 b/ `( j$ o% {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* o: n1 x  z4 V" f/ B$ g- k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: `# N4 v1 W# i7 s, z3 @4 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; ]: W  i) H8 r8 r. L& T6 a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 O! }1 g* J# @7 \& [2 J<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# p6 z4 L" @2 y" p6 N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- h: I- a& w' t8 h( j1 m, }9 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- g, |! T8 }) P7 R" u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# U) N$ K; Q! p' _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  q4 H/ b5 V# e8 @. S9 |; d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" O) z% {) I- w+ i" g3 b7 I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ J9 [1 K9 B/ y% ~/ `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, c$ `$ q) T1 t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 s2 C: x  U+ {+ N# l5 T* R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) ^! f8 [& r/ ?# ]7 \  [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 u& S7 g- m  E8 |7 b  \- I1 E1 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) B( q5 E3 ]+ V7 J) l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ H; X% R, T8 v% f) |; j2 x* t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) D% a# U  X/ A/ k<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' a) c) a& I5 ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- x& r5 J7 ?) r+ g; g3 D" W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* V4 T( M' r4 u- F& p0 o1 p# Z4 B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; ?2 n& S) z; N/ ]/ V6 E( L" d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 S+ L0 f7 Q- I  X% l- o! W/ S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 ^5 @+ @( S# m+ }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 {: G: p; u/ Y; G: H& Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# T0 q3 p2 x5 W% V, k; R  T5 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 j# X0 p! \9 q  x$ i5 G$ m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% G1 I8 ]* p7 o  ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. m7 ~1 r6 m" b) L/ l! k$ q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 O* m) _1 C# M; x1 x4 [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! W* @6 @) i$ t% }6 M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ q! a+ K: d& A# D7 g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>